Join date: Mar 2010
702 IQ
Hey. So I was noodling around on my guitar last night and came up with this and wanted to share it. I'm not entirely sure what direction to take it in just yet, but so far it is what it is. Also, the piece so far is missing one bar to finish off the intro, I've tried several ideas and hated them all.

Crit? Ideas? Toss 'em here!
The Haunting.gp5
Ridding sanity
Join date: Sep 2009
6,433 IQ
In the "Lone Intro", instead of going with a continuous string of quarter notes, you could try different note durations. Maybe put some trills in? make the melody more catchy. The lone intro in my opinion could use some work. But I absolutely loved the "band intro" riff.

Registered User
Join date: Aug 2008
1,808 IQ
nothing wrong with it, i changed the first guitar to a nylon and let the notes ring out and it gave a better atmosphere for 1 instrument