in the pros side of it i thought the mixing was decent and the tone was pretty decent, your technique appeared to be pretty good too.

on the downside i didn't really like the song itself, nothing said "hey listen to this sweet melody" it felt like it wasn't really going anywhere, just kinda walking around in a circle. i will say i didn't listen to the whole thing, so maybe somewhere in there is some awesomeness i didn't get to.