TriviumRamazing
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2006
236 IQ
#1
Hi. I haven't written (or really listened) to metal for a couple years but a day or two ago I decided to see what I'd come up with if I did. I used to really like bands like MachineHead, In flames and Opeth just as a basis if anyone's wondering. I know there's flaws and stuff but I'd love to know what anyone thinks. I should also mention it's not finished as will be apparent. Thanks in advance guys :-)
Btw I think it's best to listen in RSE. Midid sounds terrible.


http://www.4shared.com/file/6KpRrDVj/Metal_Song.html

The file was too big so I uploaded in 4shared. Hope that's okay
TriviumRamazing
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2006
236 IQ
#2
Any one? I should point out a mistake at bar 119- should be in 4/4 not 5. The error causes a beat long pause which is quite disjointed. C4C :-)
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,191 IQ
#3
Let me first recommend you checking out dropbox to upload bigger files, there's no hassle to go through a site to download or anything. I'd crit it but I can't download it because the page won't load. BTW check out my song again, I think you'd like it a good bit more now that I updated it a bit.