Hello, all! This is my first post here. I just decided to make a small thread to get things started.

This is a short 'orchestral' piece I wrote a long time ago, and I wanna know what you think of it I guess. It's my first foray into this type of music, after being inspired by film soundtracks and some other UGers on here.

I might crit yours if you crit mine
it was really nice. it was quite dramatic. and i love how the flute came in. i changed the rock organ to a curch organ and lowered it an octave and sounded pretty good. it clashed a bit though. i think the glockenspiel and pizzicato strings should play somthing more interesting though. the quarter notes didnt do it for me. in measure 16 there is a sour note. i dont know if that was intentional but it doesnt make it resolve to well. keep working on it though.

i enjoyed that. i like the intro, the glockenspiel gives it a really sinister feel. then the other intruments come in and they all sound really good together.