Acoustic number: From what I can hear, it sounds pretty good, nice guitar progressions, your voice seemed a little pitchy at times, just barely. I think this would be much better if you move farther away from your mic, or use a better quality mic. Pretty good though

Adventure: It seems pretty good, but the same thing with your recording, nice job with the drums. I think you'll get better results if you double track your music. But your songs seem to be very good quality. Nice job. You might want to change up the parts where you say, "adventure, adventure" just try to change it up a bit so that it doesn't get monotonous.

would you take a look at my song?
Thanks man!

Yeah I was using the I-movie and built in microphone on my macbook pro. Unfortunately, adventure has garageband drums lol.

I can't check out your music right now, BUT send me a message with the link and I'll check it out!