#1
First time I ever recorded one of my songs, guitar is done in one go so there are mistakes a plenty, my voice isnt great either but apart from that let me know what you think and give me some feedback, cheers.

http://soundcloud.com/neil-keegan/forget-about-it
when irish eyes are smiling, you've had to too much to drink cus eyes dont smile, mouths do
#2
Perhaps if I said C4C?
when irish eyes are smiling, you've had to too much to drink cus eyes dont smile, mouths do
#3
I'll start with the crit first: sound like the low string was slightly out if tune, there is a lot of background noise and the vocals are hard to hear at times and sound very thin. I do like the tune and the words. The guitar part is very nice and has a very traditional folky kinda sound. I think you need to work on the recording itself a bit but overall sound really nice.
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fretz is absolutely right.
#4
Thanks for the crit, taken that all on board
when irish eyes are smiling, you've had to too much to drink cus eyes dont smile, mouths do