#1
Yeah, so I'm writing some demos lately, and I would love your opinion on my latest.

http://soundcloud.com/passingseptember/youre-not-alone

c4c as always, just leave me a link.

Gear:
Ibanez SZ320 -> Höfner Analouge Delay -> MXR GT-OD -> Laney GH50L -> T.C.Electronics GMajor -> Line6 4x12 w/ Celestion G12T-75


My Lyrics and Poems


"with golden hair and perfect eyes,

with hollow words and empty lies."
#2
I like your voice. It's not perfect yet, but the emotional delivery and overall tone of it is good. The overdubs were pretty weak though. Your voice sounds good by itself.

The piano solo and the strings were a great addition, and the song itself is well written. This is my kind of music.

I thought that the vocal effect you had at the end of song sounded good, but was a little cheesy. Same with the sigh.

Hope this helps
c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1469290