It's alright, not really my style though. The riff the second distortion guitar does in bars 18-32 and near the end give it a sinister sort of feel.
Yeah I don't usually add too much dissonance in my music so this was a try at something different like that. Considering that's the sound I was going for, Thanks!

I'll C4C if you guys want. Just curious on what some people on the board think of this.
The entire beginning is great. Love everything and the evil-tinged atmosphere... UNTIL 33. Lack of transition isn't working for me. Fortunately you stumble back into the intro breakdown well.

57 is ****ing sick.

As cheesy as 65 was.. I admittedly got a good chuckle out of it and didn't dislike it by any means. I'll leave it at that.

I like this. It's obviously more experimental and not exactly a 100% serious attempt at making an amazing song, so I appreciate what's shown. Awesome shit mang bro dude.
We can only guffaw at all the humbug we are told about martyrs.