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Try to get the violin notes more staccato-ey, and try halving the notes for the drum and tambourine, giving it a swingier feel. <---Well that's just what I'd do!
#3
Quote by conor-figgy
Try to get the violin notes more staccato-ey, and try halving the notes for the drum and tambourine, giving it a swingier feel. <---Well that's just what I'd do!

thanks for the tips!
what do you think of the overall composition?