#1
She just wants to fit in.
it must be lonely over there.
No one ever said,
anything would be easy

Sleep with your sirens
and the ring
that you want
placed on your hand

Take one last breath,
Wait.
what was your name?
It falls to silence.


Free verse I just did to get the juices flowing

Let me know what ya think!
Last edited by scguitarking927 at Aug 16, 2011,
#2
I like the last stanza; you could probably use that to write a new piece around. The other two are pretty dull though; nothing particularly bad about them, but nothing particularly interesting either.
#3
Quote by Winter Sky
I like the last stanza; you could probably use that to write a new piece around. The other two are pretty dull though; nothing particularly bad about them, but nothing particularly interesting either.


Hit the nail on the head, there.