#1
Would like some constructive criticism on this little bit I wrote. I feel like I use "I" too much. Not sure.

There I was in a sea of confusion
They all said they had nothing to prove
Now I can see a little clearer
I can see it wasn't the truth

I could take a guess
I could tell you the time
(I can/Can you) take a hint
I can tell you don't mind.

I could sit and wait
and hope for the best
I could sit and wait
and hold my breath

I can see myself
in a little bit of you
So just tell me what...
what can we do?