#1
talk to me

well its alright when you tell me you've got to go
when both of us really know that you
just dont want to talk to me

your friends are nice and all but
your personality is just
really unbearable
i don't think i'll stay as long
as we'd previously planned

what are you saying
i said
i hope that youre joking
you wouldnt try to pull
this type of thing
with anyone else

well its alright when you tell me you've got to go
when both of us really know that you
just dont want to talk to me

you act like we all owe you something
its real disrupting
youve tugged at my heart strings
i think i'll be leaving now

all that time that ive wasted with you
we're finally through
theres nothing to do
but just pack it up and catch the last bus home


well its alright when you tell me you've got to go
when both of us know that you
just dont want to

talk to me


i'd greatly appreciate any criticisms thank you
#2
oh this reminds me of me and my ex...hahah i love it, maybe work on the flow of it a little but its in the early stages amd alot better than anything i write