#2
No offense man, but this wasn't great. The one thing good is that you really seem to enjoy your jam, which is what matters, but you need to practice more on some licks because some times your quite out of tune.
#3
You guys have some chops, but I think, like a lot of guys your age, you haven't really taken the step from chops to putting together complex musical ideas. You've mastered the vocabulary, but you haven't figured out what you want to say.

Sounds like you guys are having fun, but it's that next step which will turn your jams into something that other people might want to listen to.