This isnt rock more like metalcore... and it's pretty good add some rhythm guitar...
I didn't find it to be very metalcore personally. I thought it was an enjoyable listen, fairly catchy chorus. However, I think sometimes it gets a little repetitive, especially with some of the lead lines, which could be spiced up with slight alterations when there are repeated patterns. I had to adjust the volume of the rhythm guitar & bass as they were too quiet originally, so I would suggest working on the mix a little bit better (although it is just a GP file so it's not a huge deal). All in all, I'd say it's a good song.

If you wouldn't mind, could you check mine out please? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1471047