CaRveItiNbass
doesn't even play bass
Join date: Oct 2005
917 IQ
#1
A friend of mine wrote this song to possibly record, as he's starting to make a home studio. He's been working on this song recently, and I told him he should really consider it. He's on the fence, and I think this song should be heard in all its glory, so I need some positive reinforcement. If you guys wouldn't mind.. C4C
Attachments:
Why be Irritated...It's Whale!.zip
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chase09
Guthrie Govan > You
Join date: Nov 2005
556 IQ
#2
I really enjoyed it, especially some of the drum parts. I can definitely hear a C&C vibe in the guitar melody at times, and the bass does a good job at grooving throughout the song. I would absolutely love to hear an actual recording of this so please make your friend get on it!

Mine is here if you wouldn't mind https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1471047
Thomasoman
#frizzlefrazzle
Join date: Feb 2007
2,912 IQ
#3
This is a really well written song. Like its extremely well written, it sounds like a REAL song, something I would listen to it. I would love to hear it fully recorded, so tell your friend that he'd better do this, and start a band and play it and all that good stuff.
Mean Mr Mustard
Naked By The Computer
Join date: Aug 2007
6,872 IQ
#4
I enjoyed it, except for everytime it went back to that intro riff. It kinda lacks something, and everytime it goes back to that it seems to get a bit stale. But as for the rest of the song, I thought it was great, I could really hear the Coheed influence. He should record it definitely.
pol315
UG's Biggest Paramore Fan
Join date: Oct 2007
435 IQ
#5
This was a really nice chill, kind of mood piece. Reminded a little bit of CHON, but a little more organized then they are. I really liked this. The bass was really good, it did alot more than just follow the guitars, it actually explored! This was a really good piece overall
CaRveItiNbass
doesn't even play bass
Join date: Oct 2005
917 IQ
#6
Guys! The song has been recorded. We'll be doing C4C, just listen to the song and review. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28040487#post28040487
XBL GamerTag = IAmSentient6

My gear:
Ibanez Artist
ESP ltd Viper 200
Schecter Diamond 8

Amps:
Marhshall MG30 (for sale)
Line 6 Spider III Half Stack (mine forever)
Interested in Melodic Thrash Metal? ALUSTRIUM AND LAST NAIL DRIVEN!