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Hey UGers!

I wrote this song with my band and it's about slaves fighting to settle a score between owners for a plot of land. I kind of want a critique about whether or not the message is clear enough to understand what's going in the story. The recording on there isn't the full song, but all the lyrics are sung there.

http://www.aaoc.bandcamp.com
"Fight Our Brothers"

Check any other song there if ya want.
Run!
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