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Interval and note wise it's really solid. You might try projecting a bit more and dropping your jaw just a bit for a bigger sound as it comes across a bit nasal, but the original has a bit of that as well so you may have been trying for it. If so, I would tone it down just a little.

Sounds good! I wish I could sing and play for half a crap...

Worth noting that I like your timing of the lyrics better than the original anyway
Last edited by AJDrac at Aug 22, 2011,
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Quote by AJDrac
Interval and note wise it's really solid. You might try projecting a bit more and dropping your jaw just a bit for a bigger sound as it comes across a bit nasal, but the original has a bit of that as well so you may have been trying for it. If so, I would tone it down just a little.

Sounds good! I wish I could sing and play for half a crap...

Worth noting that I like your timing of the lyrics better than the original anyway


Thanks for your critique. Yeah I think I hold a lot of tension in my jaw. I took vocal lessons for one month and kept telling me to drop my jaw further down. I think a lot of the tension is due to my wisdom teeth, but i can't afford to have them taken out
Thanks again!