#1
Alright so I attempted a metal song, I'm not a good metal singer, so sue me :P But I gave it a shot, In retrospect my recording really sucks... But I want to know if this is worth retracking and adding more versus on to? If you have any suggestions for it please share, I guess I'm just saying just critque it.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/pagosapig/music/all/play1036838 Its one my page, titled Fighting

Just leave me a link of your music and I'll give your stuff a look

Thanks,
Black Sheep Generation
#2
Umm, I'll be honest with you, the recording quality is beyond terrible, to the point where it gets kind of hard to judge the song itself. From what I can gather, I'd advice training your vocals to show more presence, you sound like you're not really trying as hard as you could, and it just sounds very half-assed. I did like the melodies in the chorus, and as a whole, the song sounds pretty solid in terms of structure, but, again, the quality makes it hard for me to give a more detailed crit. If you re-record this with better quality, send me a PM or something and I'll give you a more detailed crit. Cheers
#3
Hey man, I just listened to your song, and when I say listened I mean I tried. Not saying that the song is bad, but the recording is pretty much too bad to tell 2 pitches apart.

EDIT: Tried it with earphones, and I am vaguely able to hear the melodies, which I liked.
Structurewise It seems to be okay aswell,
to sum it up, I liked what I heard, but I couldn't hear that much.

Does it make sense, or am I sleeptyping again:P?
Thom
Last edited by Thsoesbergen at Aug 26, 2011,
#4
Quote by Thsoesbergen
Hey man, I just listened to your song, and when I say listened I mean I tried. Not saying that the song is bad, but the recording is pretty much too bad to tell 2 pitches apart.

EDIT: Tried it with earphones, and I am vaguely able to hear the melodies, which I liked.
Structurewise It seems to be okay aswell,
to sum it up, I liked what I heard, but I couldn't hear that much.

Does it make sense, or am I sleeptyping again:P?
Thom


Oh it makes a lot of sense, i was so excited to have figured out the song that I recorded in possible the worst quality possible. So yesterday I made a real recording with lead, rhythm and vocals, so i guess you could say I triple tracked this song XD
Anyway, I would really appreciate it if you gave my song a second look, Thanks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OztO09CspIo