#2
Hey, cool song, i liked it but at the same time would like to offer some advice. The intro, for me, goes on too long and should immediately catch my attention, so i say shorten it. As for the guitar solo, you could try staying out of the pentatonic and use things like diminished scales to get an awesome sound and more originality. Other than that it was a sweet track. I'd like to hear what you think of my stuff http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Psychotron72/
#3
Quote by Psychotron72
Hey, cool song, i liked it but at the same time would like to offer some advice. The intro, for me, goes on too long and should immediately catch my attention, so i say shorten it. As for the guitar solo, you could try staying out of the pentatonic and use things like diminished scales to get an awesome sound and more originality. Other than that it was a sweet track. I'd like to hear what you think of my stuff http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Psychotron72/


thanks for having a listen and for the advice!

im on my way to listen to yours now!
Irons