#1
Hey, I recently made a songtype thing using fruity loops.

I havent decided if I will leave it without vocals, I might even break character and try to make a really weird rapsong out of it.

Id like UGs opinion.
Its the song on my profile called: "Dunno yet"
Catchy eh?

Anyways, just tell me which song to crit in return

Thanks a bunch, and then some more
Thom
#2
I think you will need more than what you've got for it to be successful, defiantly at least lyrics. I would consider adding more depth to it, maybe more bass or some lead guitar, just about anything to spice up the mix. (On a complete sidenote your cover of mad world came on next and I thought you oughtta know that you did a splendid job on that!!!)
Good luck!
c4c: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1473373