I re-made a song as I didn't think the old ones' verse was up to scratch.

The arrangement I feel is slightly better (The original is here) but the mix is still dodgy.

Unfortunately I had a real problem with the bass and I seem to have cut it out of this mix waay too much. So I know that already but all other crit will be helpful.

Will C4C asap (I am at Leeds festival thursday-monday however, but I'll get back to you after). Just pop me a link in your crit