#1
I put little effort in making this song... just some riffs I came up with and put it together for an instrumental metal piece. I think its ok but I can do better.What do you guys think. I will C4C just post a link of the song you want me to critique or I won't bother.
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Yesterday Lives In Tommorrow.gp4
#2
I'm tired, so all I have to say is that this is the perfect amount of happy in a song

Also, seems like you revolve around pretty much the same notes throughout the song, you might want to look into that
Last edited by Erra93 at Aug 25, 2011,
#3
Quote by Erra93
I'm tired, so all I have to say is that this is the perfect amount of happy in a song

Also, seems like you revolve around pretty much the same notes throughout the song, you might want to look into that


Point taken...
#4
it is not so bad.it needs a lead part,but it was very metalcorish. try to work more with the bass and with the leads,and i think you can do a great thing

bar 200 -holy crap!! i love that riff!

please crit my song

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1467941