gabrielcev
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2011
369 IQ
#1
I put little effort in making this song... just some riffs I came up with and put it together for an instrumental metal piece. I think its ok but I can do better.What do you guys think. I will C4C just post a link of the song you want me to critique or I won't bother.
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Yesterday Lives In Tommorrow.gp4
Erra93
erriuyai
Join date: Nov 2009
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#2
I'm tired, so all I have to say is that this is the perfect amount of happy in a song

Also, seems like you revolve around pretty much the same notes throughout the song, you might want to look into that
Last edited by Erra93 at Aug 25, 2011,
gabrielcev
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Join date: Apr 2011
369 IQ
#3
Quote by Erra93
I'm tired, so all I have to say is that this is the perfect amount of happy in a song

Also, seems like you revolve around pretty much the same notes throughout the song, you might want to look into that


Point taken...
Rossielle
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Join date: Aug 2010
896 IQ
#4
it is not so bad.it needs a lead part,but it was very metalcorish. try to work more with the bass and with the leads,and i think you can do a great thing

bar 200 -holy crap!! i love that riff!

please crit my song

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1467941