the song is kinda a work in progress...im not gonna record more stuff to it or anything its just that....i have two completely different ideas of what it could sound like. one idea is the version that you will hear if you click the link. the other is the same song except stripped down with only the acoustic guitar. what do you think? should it stay as what it is or should it be just an acoustic and a voice?

Last edited by inkybutt at Aug 26, 2011,
well, first ill start by saying, its a good song idea, sounds good, like the structure and idea ur kinda headed for. but as far as the song goes, its rough. alot of its due to just crap quality i think, but ur timing is off like the whole song, and the drums sound like ur playing tin cans. vocals need some work too. if u leave as it is (full band stuff) rerecord it with some better quality and really make it tighter and everything and ull have a good song, if not it might be easier to just do voice and acoustic, i think it might be more forgiving. either way, it has potential, keep working at it. c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27983448#post27983448
Your, timing is off, I would change the drums you are using, if you doing them live then you need to change your recording method, or use a better midi. For the lyrics, I would make sure they line up right with your guitar, cause it gets really distracting when they don't line up, its has a bunch of potential to it though.

C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27994938#post27994938