#1
okay so I'm kind of new to songwriting and need some tips on how to get better, but heres a copy of my bash at it

Verse
sitting here, alone tonight
thinking to myself, is everything going to be alright

trying to find some right to this
cos i'm falling alone

i'm falling alone

Chorus
you never let me win, you never help me up
it's just me alone, hiding under this rock
i've tried to hold you, i've tried to catch you
but so far there has been no luck, with this

Verse
no-one can understand, not even you sometimes
how everything i think, brings me bad luck

were falling apart, you can see that, right,
you make me wanna be alone for the rest of my life

Chorus
you never let me win, you never help me up
it's just me alone, hiding under this rock
i've tried to hold you, i've tried to catch you
but so far there has been no luck, with this

Bridge
you never let me win, you never help me up
you never let me win, you never help me up
you never let me win, you never help me up
i'll never let you win, i'll never let you up

chorus
you never let me win, you never help me up
it's just me alone, hiding under this rock
i've tried to hold you, i've tried to catch you
but so far there has been no luck, with this

you never let me win, you never help me up
it's just me alone, hiding under this rock
i've tried to hold you, i've tried to catch you
but so far there has been no luck, with this