your audio quality was very bad. dude... if you have a rock band mic even, use it. seriously, it'll improve the quality hugely. your playing was a little lacking too. you seem very tense and that might be the cause of you to play uncleanly? regardless, i think you could easily step up your game if you just relaxed a little more and used a better mic. i added you as a friend btw (ThroughFallenEyes)

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1475348