#1
im not new to this forum and i know that this shouldnt be here, but when i was going to post it in the 'Original Recordings' section i noticed that there were only 7 people viewing it.
and also barely any videos in there get comments or even watched!

so anyway this is a song off my bands new EP
it is called broken. and really i just want some feedback and not people telling me that i have posted this in the wrong thread. :/

This Day We Fight - Broken
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#3
this still goes in OR or PYB no matter how few people are there. those are the rules.
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#4
Out of a ten it's like a 4 or 5. Vocals don't seem right for that genre... Sorry.
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Not really digging it. And their shouldnt be 15 seconds of nothingness at the beginning of a song.
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#7
Dude this needs something, and that something is to be in the original recording section. Follow the rules dickhead.
#8
Not bad...I felt like the song was slower than I wanted it to be. I'm not a big fan of the clean vocals, but I like the screams. I like the guitar work, but the instrumental break starting at around the 3rd minute seemed kind of boring. The song ended in a kind of anticlimatic way, to me. On the other hand, I may be criticising it, but I've been too nervous to share my stuff with anyone on here, so take my opinion for what its worth. I did enjoy the song and giving my feedback to try to help so I hope you don't take it as a negative.
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Not bad...I felt like the song was slower than I wanted it to be. I'm not a big fan of the clean vocals, but I like the screams. I like the guitar work, but the instrumental break starting at around the 3rd minute seemed kind of boring. The song ended in a kind of anticlimatic way, to me. On the other hand, I may be criticising it, but I've been too nervous to share my stuff with anyone on here, so take my opinion for what its worth. I did enjoy the song and giving my feedback to try to help so I hope you don't take it as a negative.


really thanks, because you listened and gave feedback so i appriciate it
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Judging by join dates now, huh?

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#13
Although this should be in OR I will say that it isn't bad, not my cup of tea genrewise though.
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Dude you've been on here since 2010 so shut the fuk up because you're being a prick. He/She (probably he) is right about the forum thing, go back to trying to suck your own dik and fuk of with arrogant comments. Your song was complete shite, generic metalcore pussy, with bad vocals and awful drummer. Get some talent.
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#15
Yeah, OR.

Ehh, clean vocals don't seem to fit. The lyrics are generic emocore. That's all I have to say.

EDIT: Okay, while I'm at it, the bass is nonexistent. It's not awful, but it's not great either.
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#16
The song itself isn't all that bad really.

The vocals COULD be better, but still, not bad, i'd give it a 5/10.
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But seriously, i like the instrumentation...but something about the Vocals...
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#18
something messed up about this forum, yea i have only been a member since 2010 but have been on the website for ages.
all i wanted was some feedback on my song.
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#19
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Don't admit in the OP that you know you're breaking the rules.

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#20
S'ok..
Work on it.
The verse is the same thing over and over, add some variety, also dont be afraid to use silence, either, the guitar was constant throughout... the contrast between the silence/heavyness makes it seem even heavier.
Work on it, sounds like a wip at the moment

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