#1
Hey people
I didn't know if I should post here or Original Recordings, but I guess here is good as anywhere. Could you guys critique my improvisation? I've been working on coming up with interesting melodies without sounding too 'plain', as bluesy stuff often does.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WVkHb9VD6QI

Again, sorry if this is the wrong place. Any tips?
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#2
Moved to recordings
Actually called Mark!

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#3
Thanks, man. I guess maybe it does belong here
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