bingeandletgo
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#1
Don't mind the singing track; that was supposed to be a little harmony thing. Personally, I think the key change is a little too spontaneous and dramatic. Any tips on that would be great.
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Rock Band.gpx
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guitar ben94
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Join date: Mar 2009
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#2
Hey, thanks for the crit on mine.

I can't open gpx files, so could you post a gp4/5 version so I could crit yours back?
bingeandletgo
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#3
No problem bud.

Here ya go
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Rock Band GP5.gp5
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guitar ben94
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#4
As a whole, I liked it! The main riff is solid and sounds pretty cool. I really like the chorus-y type thing that starts at 17. Thought it sounds really cool. Other than that, the ending part, starting at bar 62, sounds quite a lot like the verse of Under the Bridge by RHCP to me, so you might want to make a few changes to that, as it sounds very similar, especially with the bass playing what are like the lead parts in between the chords on UtB. Good stuff though