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Hi, I wrote this a little while ago. I would love to hear any feedback one might have. It would have a kind of hardcore/new-wave/metal swing to it. There may be a breakdown.

How can you expect me to remain silent,
When you constantly remind me of ill fates
How can I staple my lips shut
When I’m bleeding from my ears and you don’t seem to care

It’s hard to feel wanted
When you tape a plastic bag over my head
And watch me gasp for air
I’m watching our romance fade to nothing,
And I’m screaming inside for something to give

What can be done?
Is this the end?
I guess it was fun while it lasted
But I wish that we could mend
This torn fabric that lies between us

And don’t you ****ing dare blame this on me
I was not the one who lost my flame

I was not the one who lost my flame
The fire is still in my eyes
It’s burning me inside

Only strength will mend these wounds
This isn’t natural at all

It’s hard to feel wanted
When you tape a plastic bag over my head
And watch me gasp for air
[I’m watching our romance fade to nothing,
And I’m screaming inside for something to give]
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