I love this song. As for you cover of it, it's good but i think you should strum much softer and maybe use your thumb to get rid of that twang and maybe concentrate of just strumming a few of the strings for example just strumming the top 3 on a G chord.
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Thanks oosh, was just a quick demo recording - nothing special - but will keep your comments in mind