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The Storm’s Answer
RUN
Step by step
Retracing the steps of millions
Upon a slab of stone
Epoch after epoch reshaped
Lifesaving spiral
Turning on it self
Mobius strip leaving
No ground left to stand

Yield now
For you are falling away
No axiom to cling on to
Abnegate from hope
For you are falling
It is done

Destruction feedbacks
Sending ripples
Through the waters of origin
Gooseflesh on the skin of the earth
The storm answering before its arrival
Waves crashing at the horizon
Forbearers of the apocalypse
Moving backwards
Through the paradigm

Yield now
For you are falling away
No axiom to cling on to
Abnegate from hope
For you are falling
It is done


Would appreciate any critique
Gear:
Electric
2008 Epiphone G400 Heritage CherryFUBAR
2008 Ibanez GRG 170 DX
2009 Cort KX1Q
2011 LTD H 351 NT
Randall RG 50 TC
Ernie Ball 11-54
Acoustic
Dean Markley
Dunlop 10's