#1
Can I get a bit of constructive criticism on my playing and technique? I know this was sloppy. I can play it better easily (after playing for too long my hand wasn't responding as well) but I'd like some crit on my technique and playing.

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#2
whoaa man that was awesome!!

I'm not really good with sweeps. But I do know that if you felt it was sloppy then you should've practiced more. I felt it was good, maybe you'd like to practice with a metronome.

Although I can say some notes weren't clear enough. But practice fixes that!

I loved it

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