Sort of like a "letter to myself in the past" type thing. It's not a whole song, but what do you think of it so far? Hope you like it!

Seeing life through newborn eyes
Tear the veil which cloaks the lies
Promises you broke so long ago
Watching how you're so misguided
Everything wrong that I did
Now I wish that you had only known
Everything that's wrong with us
Care to state the obvious?
A photograph of me so long ago
Tell myself I've changed
But how could I know
to compensate for the last crit, I just had to come here to say that I really liked this piece alot
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.