WorldsAtLarge
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Join date: Aug 2011
21 IQ
#1
In this song i was going for a kinda Modest Mouse sound, but with my own influences as well. Please crit if you'd like, any comments welcome. Thanks!

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FacetOfChaos
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Join date: Jun 2008
627 IQ
#2
It kind of has a folk song feel to it. In the beginning it does anyways.

I felt that the intro was too long. About half that time would be good.

I felt that a lot of the sections could be a little shorter actually. If not shorter, at least with more variations going on to keep it interesting.
I thought it had kind of a nice vibe. Most of it definitely went on a little bit too long however.
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