#2
You chose an ugly picture.

The mixing was awful.

You need to not mess up.

The tone is just... bad. Flat out bad.

You SERIOUSLY need to work on it more to be even good.

You said be harsh. So I was. Don't take offense. I'm not even any better, but you asked for criticism.
#3
Okay, but elaborate what about mixing. What too quiet what too loud, eqing what, etc.
And what about song structure, riffs, etc
#4
Quote by a122412
Okay, but elaborate what about mixing. What too quiet what too loud, eqing what, etc.
And what about song structure, riffs, etc


Could've used more mids and highs, guitar was barely audible.

And the song structure sounded like it was just kind of a jam that wasn't meant to really go anywhere or turn into a song. Some good riffs, but shouldn't have been a song.
#5
Quote by Wisthekiller
Could've used more mids and highs, guitar was barely audible.

And the song structure sounded like it was just kind of a jam that wasn't meant to really go anywhere or turn into a song.



that^, the tone is possibly the worst ive ever heard. it sounds like your playing a bass through a whammy pedal shifted up an octave


there isnt really structure whatsoever... just kinda one riff followed by another riff and so on.

plus you mess up, the umm... "leads" almost constantly, it all sounds out of key.


hate to be so harsh, but you asked for it.

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1475998