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I just finished writing this song and I'm hoping to get some feedback on it. It's a pretty simple song and I know my voice isn't the greatest but **** it.

Crit4Crit

http://soundcloud.com/andy_chalmers_102/photogenesis-1
I'm here to help

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ok, as usual pit is being very unhelpful except andychalmers, so im gonna go post this someplace else


And a master of storytelling...

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andychalmers102, that story is awesome.