#4
I liked your facial expressions. You look sort of like Josh Ocean.

Anyways, to the critique. I really loved the sweeps. They were extremely melodic and well played, which I loved (None of that random dead notes or different velocity notes, y'know?). As for the drums, they didn't sound as good as I thought they would in the description. I thought it would be some kickass sort of metal mixed with chiptune sound, but it ended up sounding like some sort of crappy MIDI metronome.

Don't get me wrong, the whole thing was awesome, but I felt like you could of kept that same chiptune+sweep feel, without making it sound like a metronome. Maybe change up beat to be a bit more intense and add other chip instruments?

Anyways, C4C?