#1
I smoked DMT and my life changed forever.
I was told of its power,
but I had no idea...

I was lured by promises
Of truths and cures,
From all the Soothsayers and Seers
Slash purveyors of illicit gears
That appear on the kind of roads that the lost like to journey on.
The mixed bag of lunatics and scholars
that holler glossolalic about the awesome power of entheogens,
and how psychedelics could have potentially had profound effects
on the early-human neo-cortex,
and tell me in a nutshell that
“If something can make a monkey understand the concept of art,”
Then I should
“Just try to imagine the benefits it could have on a vaguely intelligent person...”


Obviously,
I jumped at the chance to buy in,
To something as divine and profound
as a misunderstood chemical compound,
That hints at epic blasts through hyperspace,
And at the end of the journey,
I will be offered a brief glimpse of some actual answers
To questions that i’m not even sure I ever would have actually asked.

I ordered up,
and waited until the time was right.
When it finally was,
I loaded a bowl, fired it up
I breathed, and held.

I did it.


But nothing really happened,

Because I didn’t do enough.

And since then, as if by cosmic magic
I’ve found myself unconsciously becoming more proactive in day to day life.
--------------------i'm definitely the alphaest male here--------------------
Last edited by FunkasPuck at Sep 1, 2011,
#2
A little bit literal at some points, but it's very well written. Some very good lines, and it also flows. Good job.
Last edited by KevinDG at Sep 1, 2011,
#3
I'm hesitant to do DMT only because I don't smoke. I'll stick to my mushrooms and LSD. I think the second section is the best one.
the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones that never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn


#4
Its very literal. Although its not actually about drugs.

But thanks for reading.
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#6
thanks. its good to have stuff to write again. again. again.
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