#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zRc7aY2gnOY

I'm kinda confused on what subgenre this is, cuz it sounds like thrash and metalcore put together.. but other than that, I just want some opinions on this song.
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Last edited by kenvy at Sep 1, 2011,
#2
I thought it was good but it was just a little bit boring for me. It just seemed like it was following the same pattern the whole time. Also, I think there needs to be some sort of epic solo thrown in there, but I'm no expert so what do I know =P. It was pretty cool regardless, so keep up the good work
#3
Thanks guy..

@Eddie - I already have some ideas on changing the song to make it better, once I get the chance I'll rerecord the song. And there is a bassline, maybe i didn't make it loud enough thoug :P

@TimePirate - well tbh, I'm not so good at writing solos xD. Maybe once i start or join a band, the other guitarist can do something with the song.
Quote by Penis_wanker
hey guyz...i have a problem with my dick as i am trying to put inside the guitar input jack.

Its very small but it still doesn't fit in.

Can anyone give me some advice how i can put my dick in?

I am very horny right now


Cheers!
#4
Good song here are some suggestions for mixing it up and making it better

Throw in some off-time triplet notes in your riffs (hard to explain)
Also the notes are all eigths in your riffs, try to trow in a quick 16th run in the middle of a riff

These should spice up the riffs more

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#5
It sounds pretty ****ing sick dude, great job, I really like it. **** what genre it is, it's your own music, definitely metal though I wanna hear more.
#6
Solid playing, great riffs, good tone, and sick guitar. I like it a lot, but I think it could use some more work. Man, i'm gonna keep replaying this so I can just go with your guitar lines. I'm curious to see what I can write to go with it. Keep it up.

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