#1
Hey guys, Have a new original Death metal song, Hope you like it, (before anyone mentiones it, I plan to turn the drums and vocals up a bit)

Still, enjoy, it's rather brutal.

http://soundcloud.com/terran_mackay/bleeding-jaws-and-bloody-gauze

EDIT: I did all the parts, vocals, bass, drums, guitar, etc. Be gentle about the vocals, I just started a month or so ago.


THE LINK DIDN'T WORK, BUT IT'S FIXED NOW.
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Last edited by Tango616 at Sep 5, 2011,
#2
not bad man yes vocals need work but like u said started a month ago so not bad for short amount of time but for doing everything ur self its pretty good music im tryin to put a whole solo thing together as well so i like to hear other people tryin as well gives me hope that i can do it keep recording man
#3
Quote by EddieOwen
That really scared me at the beginning, I had my volume on full. Do you have lyrics? And I kinda think the rhythm guitar needs to be turned up a bit, pretty hard to hear.

Yeah I'm going to turn up the rhythm in the one part where it breaks off, and yes I have lyrics. It's about a crazy dentist when you are put under, but can feel everything.

LYRICS:

Bound a strap across my embodiment,
strangled in silence, trapped in assesment.
lambent lights constrict my eyes,
affliction spreads out through my thighs.

Crinsom instruments dangle, dripping in my vision.
as I cry sinister masked figured plans the incision.

I'm Awake

Severing teeth, it's just sickening,
it's discharging, remains seeping,
Oozing from my bloody jaws,
all his knives just feel like claws

He is pulling on the ripcord,
starting up the blood-drenched bonesaw.
exsausted and weakened by the sight of all the gauze.

Bleeding Jaws, and bloody Gauze

I feel his knife and hand slip
as he ****s up my whole mouth rips,
ripped and torn right to the bone,
I can now, only moan.

Bleeding Jaws and Bloody gauze.
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- Yes, My name is actually Terran -
- Not just a Starcraft fan -


Terran > Zerg and Protoss
#4
Fixed The Link For People Who Couldn't Get It To Work.
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- Yes, My name is actually Terran -
- Not just a Starcraft fan -


Terran > Zerg and Protoss