I wrote this for an IB English summer project and I have to present it to the class in a few days. I'm wondering if there's anything I could change so I'm posting it here for feedback.

An American Childhood is a memoir written by Annie Dillard. This composition uses quotes from the audiobook narrated by Tavia Gilbert.

The piece is made up of four smaller sections to reflect the small chapters the book contains as if each were a little journal entry. Throughout the piece, discordant dissonance settles into more tonal consonance to represent the author's gradual understanding of the world.