#1
sooo here goes my lyrics.

(I know some of you will think it sucks, but I don't give a ****, anyway I wanna know your opinions. Plz remember that on the general song context, I like it.)

Alright, lets stop the chit chat and read em.


VERSE 1
I've got a friend
And she is cool
She will set me up
With her friend

VERSE 2
But she gotta know
That to please me
It has to be
A really cute girl

CHORUS
And now you may tell me
Cool story bro
But I don't care at all
Cause I will get a date


That's all.
Last edited by vitorlp at Sep 5, 2011,
#3
Quote by vitorlp
sooo here goes my lyrics.

(I know some of you will think it sucks, but I don't give a ****, anyway I wanna know your opinions. Plz remember that on the general song context, I like it.)

Alright, lets stop the chit chat and read em.


VERSE 1
I've got a friend
And she is cool
She will set me up
With her friend

VERSE 2
But she gotta know
That to please me
It has to be
A really cute girl

CHORUS
And now you may tell me
Cool story bro
But I don't care at all
Cause I will get a date


That's all.


Not sure if serious.
#4
the genre is sorta pop punk. Im not sure btw. it also remind me a little of hard rock and rock'n'roll
Last edited by vitorlp at Sep 5, 2011,
#5
Your thread title is against the rules, dude. You should probably change it.
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The safest place was not her arms, but her eyes
Where she can't see you
For her gaze, it blisters;
Grey skin to cinders
#6
Obvious troll or oblivious 13/14 year old is obvious or oblivious.
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#7
It kind of seems superficial... That and there is zero flow.
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