#1
"Time ticks by so slow
Torturing we lover’s minds
Can’t we take our time?"

"Boys like to kiss girls
Girls rarely kiss boys they like
Cooties are just gross."

"You’re a bright zap light
And I’m just the little bug.
How could I resist?"


(This was very on the spot, literally i just wrote them within the past 15 minutes, but i just got inspired by reading everyone else's material, i had to post some new stuff of my own. Also, if my syllable counting was wrong, feel free to tell me) Hope ya like em!
#3
No, Haiku are syllable based; five in the first line, seven in the second, five in the third.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
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It's you
#4
i was trying for the 5,7,5 syllable pattern... i actually dont know much about haiku at all, but i know the most common is 5,7,5, so that's what i went with.... And thanks
#5
No yours were fine :P

My reply was to the other guy.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
Quote by Hydra150
There's a dick on Earth, too
It's you
#6
short and sweet I loved the boys kiss girls the most! good read.
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