#1
All right so I just tried writings lyrics for the first time, to go with a song I wrote. This is still a work in progress with a lot to go, but I would like to know what you guys think.


Everything is gonna be just fine this time

Alone I walk the streets at night with no one in sight
memories and thoughts always putting up a fight with me, if only you could see

All I want to know is everything will be all right but there is no hope in sight, no source of light painted in this picture of emptiness and pain
Nothing is the same, just endless strain
#2
Sounds more like a poem to me, but maybe witht he instruments and a good vocalist it would sound legit. Good work!
#3
Yeah you would have to hear how it flows with the song to get a better idea. Thank you though!