#1
new here. This is supposed to be perspective of a military man, coming home from service with scars and a rocky relationship at home snaps. Still deciding what style it's gonna be played in.

One look at your scars
Was it something I did,
Or was I gone, yet again?
Lying to myself, from the world I had hid.
convincing myself we'd be okay,
I remember your shattered face,
Is it too late to fix you?
Have I lost your heart, shattered, misplaced?

Time will never tell, the secrets i've made,
The lives that were lost, the places that changed,
I'm here now love, please don't shy away,
My heart, unlike yours, never once strayed.
Live and let live, the past is the past,
No more, my darling, let my love be last.

For you, I stood tall,
For you this life stole,
From another girls heart,
His body and soul.

Time will never tell, the secrets i've made,
The lives that were lost, the places that changed,
I'm here now love, please don't shy away,
My heart, unlike yours, never once strayed.
Live and let live, the past is the past,
No more, my darling, let my love be last.

Quit screaming, stop fighting,
I did this for you!
You ****ed with *my* heart,
And now *I* broke yours too?
My arm ain't my heart,
THAT'S your bullshit excuse?
Well, I'm sorry to bother: barrell's in my throat,
Hear this song, my love, as a suicide note.

Time will never tell, the secrets i've made,
The lives that were lost, the places that changed,
I'm gone now love, please don't shy away,
My heart, unlike yours, never once strayed.
Live and let live, the past is the past,
Carry me with you, my darling, make my love your last.
Last edited by JonBear_ at Sep 9, 2011,
#3
Quote by Insanity ninja
Forever alone ¬.¬

**** off troll.

This actually sent shivers down my spine bro. The chorus is powerful, especially the line, "My heart, unlike yours, never strayed" the comparison of the two really puts things in perspective.

I have to ask what you mean by the last line of the chorus though, "No more, my darling, let my love be last." ? Like his love would be the last love? iunno

The third verse is really my favourite though. the emotion seems to be just pouring into it and it comes out and cuts like a knife and the ending leaves on a strong rhyme.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1479685
#4
The only thing i can come up with to say to this piece is...BADASS, well done good sir
#5
Woah, chill man. This simply reminded me of my current state of affairs. I love the lyrics, I was just relating.

*Edit, got wrong quote.
#6
Wow,those lyrics were.... awesome.
Like BloodReverence the 3rd verse was my favorite.
It showed how rocky the relationship actually was.
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#8
<3 all of you for comments.

@BloodReverence the last line is meant to be something along the lines of "carry your mistakes with you, you've taken a life" kind of deal - he doesn't want her to forget what she did, and if that means he was her last lover, so be it.

Thank you again all, i'll throw something else up here in a bit.