This is sort of pop punk I guess, but it's in a minor key, so whatever. Just let me know what you think, any suggestions you have would be welcome.
Glad to hear some pop punk on this forum

Anyways, Ill crit from the intro as I listen to the song:
- The intro could use some "let ring" up in there
- Could add some cymbals to help when the distorted guitars ring out for a bar
- Distortion intro was good, for some reason it reminded me of new MCR though.
- Verse 1 had that nice punk drum beat behind it, I like.
- The vocals have been okay so far except I didn't like the melody of bar 38. Oh and also, the same notes were used throughout the verse and chorus, so maybe to give it some oomph you could add a higher harmony to it.
- Really liked the Pre-Verse, liked the vocals, favorite section so far.
- Liked the bass and drums break, but the drums needed some tom fills and stuff added in.
- Bridge was great, and led into the chorus very nicely.
- Nice job incorporating the intro as the outro section, and then ending on that Pre-Verse fill. It made for a very complete sounding song.

So overall, it was very good. Honestly, it was more like an A7X or MCR song than it was a punk song, but I enjoyed it so who cares. It was fast paced and kept me interested throughout, good job.

Could C4C with this