You need more grit in the "Hey! Wait!" part. Considering the vocalist who sang this originally, the bits where your off-key are fine, it is Nirvana afterall. Also, where the harmonies bro?
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the only crit i have is that the vocals fall flat in a lot of parts.

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Well, i liked it halfways. I feel like you aren't connected with the song. Like you are singing it right, maybe sometimes a little bit out of tune, but, it lacks the emotion or gutural feeling that Nirvana transmits..

Hey, my friends and I, formed a band, 3 months ago, and we recorded our first cover,
Would you be so kind to check the video and leave a comment at YouTube?


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