#1
So I just recorded a bunch of videos about 20~40 seconds each hah.
Give me negative and positive feedbacks even if you just go through one video hah.

Canon 6 String W/Tap

Jason Becker Altitudes Sweep < I messed up badly but yeah hah

Canon Rock Sweep Solo

I'm Alright Sweep Solo < The actual sweep is supposed to be more faster than the one in my video, and as you can see..My accuracy goes down by alot even at this speed hah

Canon 5 String Sweep < Another crap one


So anyways, just send some feedbacks
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
#3
i loved the Canon 6 String W/Tap one, and the tone that you're getting, its not overly distorted from what i can tell. Great job with the sweeps, just dont know exactly how to critique and say how to do better...sounded clean enough to me lol
#4
You're definitely getting there. What I'd work on now is getting your timing tighter. I'd also practice sweeping from the high strings to the lower ones. You're much better when going the other way.
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#5
anything else i should watch out for?
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
#6
You're technique seems pretty solid, but just make sure to practice to a metronome at least. It was clean but the timing in the canon 6 string sweep seemed a little off. Not by very much though. Keep up the good work!
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#7
thanks!
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
#9
I watched a few of them and you've got some good progress there. The two main things you need to work on are timing and consistency. Use a metronome, slow down, and make sure that all the notes come out nice and even.
Speed is a by-product of shut the fuck up.
#10
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anything else i should watch out for?


Your pinky, keep it closer to the fretboard when lifting off, no need to let it backlash like a whip :P
Nice playing.
#11
It's all been said. Your technique is pretty good.

Timing needs to be worked on, and consistency as Aleksi said earlier. Apart from that, well done.
May the Force be with You.
Carmel is hawt
#12
1. You should use a metronome

2. Work with a metronome to get rid of the sloppy playing

3. The original version i think is a little faster

4. I wrote a complete guide for Sweep picking you should check it out:

http://www.guitarlearningtips.org/guitar-technique/sweep-picking-exercises/

5. I also made another sweep picking version of canon. You should check it out

http://www.guitarlearningtips.org/guitar-technique/sweep-picking-exercises-part-2/