#1
I originally wrote this song in 2007 and recorded it on a crappy desktop microphone [can be seen on my profile] but i got inspired today sooooo i re-recorded it.
CRIT 4 CRIT?

profile.
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/x+X+t+o+c+z./music/all/play1042828

or youtube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AudAI5MyUaI&feature=channel_video_title
Quote by Mistress_Ibanez

I used to hate chavs until my sister got a smack in the mouth from one. Now I love them.
#2
that was very pleasant on the ears. very simple melody but it all flowed together very well. kinda sad to listen to, but in a good way. your voice is pretty soft but i like it. the general overall "feel" of the song is quite nice, very pleasant. keep up the good work, man. you have a lot of talent.
#3
thanks alot man. glad you enjoyed it!
Quote by Mistress_Ibanez

I used to hate chavs until my sister got a smack in the mouth from one. Now I love them.
#4
Hey, thanks for checking out my song and commenting.

This isn't my usual cup of tea, but I thought the song was really well done. There's a bit of a hiss throughout that I'm guessing is the 'air' from the guitar track. That aside, I thought everything sounded really nice. Maybe drop the guitars a little bit in volume a bit to let the vocals be more of the focal point.

Great melodies and harmonies. Your voice suites the style very well! The strings added a great ambiance and kinda helped glue everything together.

Keep it up!
#5
Hey man great song! I can tell you spent some time on it. The only thing I can really add that everyone has hit one already is to my ears the guitar sounds slightly harsh. Maybe bring the treble in the mix just slightly. Other then that great job! I really love the strings.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1479614
Quote:
Originally Posted by JAHellraiser
Go into Guitar Center and tell them you are willing to spend $3000 on as many Spider and MG half stacks as they can give you.
#6
Simple guitar hook, but it works. The vocals sound soothing and relaxing, I liked them. The second guitar was nice as well, adding a nice little touch and not making the song feel as empty. The song is really nice to listen to, but I can't help but feel it could use a tad more variety, since it gets a bit stale at some points. But, other than that, I really enjoyed it, good work!


C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1478845
#7
thanks alot for the feedback so far guys. after transferring the song on to my phone and listening through my earbud headphones, ive definately picked up on what you guys have said about the guitar standing out too much so i'll get on fixing that.
Quote by Mistress_Ibanez

I used to hate chavs until my sister got a smack in the mouth from one. Now I love them.
#8
wow I love this song, the guitar sounds great, though it could be dropped down a bit volume wise as others have mentioned. The vocals are also really good, you have a great voice. I don't really have any complaints on this track aside from the guitar overpowering the vocals, which is an easy fix. Also sorry for the late crit been busy with school.