#4
Your tone of voice is nice and soothing, but you have got to watch out on some of the notes cause you go a bit flat and sharp at times. Also, I think the rhythm of your singing could lock in more with the groove of the song, try to sing around the beat it makes it more organic and pleasant to the ear. Not much I can say about the guitar playing other than it sounded good and was on-time. All in all, it was pretty good man!

I would appreciate it if you checked out my cover version of Redemption Song and tell me what you think! thanks

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1400796
#5
listening while i post, great voice i love it. But i agree with devilz, there was one or too parts were you should listen back for the shaprness and flatness of notes, its the phrase before redemption song. But its still very good besides that so yeah, great job